The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey "Falcon" Logue

This has a negative impact on the quality of writing, because it's impossible to build a proper arc of suspense when the story isn't published in a self-contained book any more. I don't like it when a book isn't a just book any more, but nowadays is only part of a much larger whole with an arbitrary cut-off point. I'm fully aware that the upswing of self-published authors in recent years and the not inconsiderable influence of Amazon's kindle unlimited program on an author's finances do affect how writers go about their work, but I don't like the results. One last thing I need to comment on is the book's general plot development and the ending. While the proofreading wasn't as bad as it could be, after I've come to experience many other independently published works, it wasn't perfect either.

Out of all characters I found the sidekick quite predictable, the antagonists/villains were neither original nor exciting and the rest just sort of existed, so the main story could develop.

After having read this first book I have to conclude that the premise wasn't as interesting as I had hoped it would be. Some human being reborn as a sentient dungeon in an rpg-like world I hadn't ever heard or read about a plot-device like this and it sounds quite ridiculous at first, but it drew me to this story and made me stick with it until the end.

The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey &quot;Falcon&quot; Logue

The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey "Falcon" Logue